PHQ-Nickname:
hollow
Halfquake:
Radical Perfection
Level:
21
Total kills:
711,304
Birthday:
September 25th 1985
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| Mood: | depressive |
| Type: | Story |
| Added: | December 01st 2004, 03:28:38 |
| Visits: | 1252 |
| Rating: | Not rated yet. |
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I think I went go home to mow this lawn as I mulled over the plot we hatched. We saw truth in a museum. It was in the way back, the storage. We had gone to the museum in order to see a really famous mummy from the Valley of the Kings, carefully shipped in from sands far removed from here. The Living God of the Egyptian people, transformed from living god to ascendant sun incarnate in death, the cycle completed without religious difficulty in his final incarnation as a tourist attraction. Or, you had goen to see the mummy, and I had gone with you.
We (You and I) arrived on our pilgrimage and with purpose hunted the ancient royalty. He hid from us so long I suggested that perhaps they were hiding him. The person in charge of the itinerary to this king's busy afterlife must have deemed his time here more than sufficient, and that Sri Lanka had pined for his worthy presence too long. The map was a bit too clear about the likely storage spaces, and you led inside quickly, unseen, and I followed you. It was left unlocked by trusting stewards, or clever theives that had preceeded us in trespassing.
No theives revealed themselves, and although the king was nice, and splendid in his gold and stuffing, in a adjacent crate, which somehow could not disguise it's contents, was the truth. This would solve all our problems, I think you said. I could not think of how to reply. Or, I did, I wanted to say so many things to you, as I always do, but as usual I kept my mouth closed. Prying and peeling the wood encasing it was futile and there were no crowbars or anything of the sort in evidence. You wanted to take the shipping tag from the Egyptian and put it on the truth. Then Sri Lanka would be the first place to know the truth, but it would get to us eventually. I asked for your hand in marriage, but what you heard was that I would go to my house and think the plan over. As I mowed, yes.
You don't remember? Don't you recall any of this?
I know why you don ' t remember any of it. Want me to tell you? |
TheAwake
December 01st 2004, 17:27:17
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| Yes |
Insidious_nOOb
December 01st 2004, 21:42:47
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LOL You MUST tell us! 
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TheAwake
December 02nd 2004, 11:41:25
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I know it was lame but well it was too tempting I guess and dont tell me u didnt know wed do that when u wrote the story, so cmon...you owe us something  Comment your comments, at least onceeee |
hollow
December 03rd 2004, 00:39:25
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| Because you looked at the truth. THAT IS WHY |
hollow
December 03rd 2004, 07:41:50
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| these writings are complete in and of themselves. if it ends with a question, it is meant to add to the meaning, not some cheap thrill from a cliffhanger ending. |
TheAwake
December 04th 2004, 15:17:57
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I know that it wasnt supposed to be a thing no one could figure out, however I couldnt or didnt. Its not the easiest thing for me to understand your stories (for example I have no clue what ur newest one is about) and I certainly hope that this is caused by me being from germany rather than my lack of...brainability
Well however, now that u told me I need to think things over...I like things that make people thinking but I dont like it when Im not getting the final result...well guess I suck, hihi |
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